Post by MissFantastic on Dec 29, 2015 21:56:37 GMT -6
-General Stuff-
Name: Quick Crack
Nickname/Alias(es): Crack, Charger
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Female
Age: Young Adult, 19
Sexuality: Lesbian
Additional Status: Crack doesn't wear anything special besides her fake wing.
-Appearance-
Pelt Color: Dark Grey
Mane/Tail Color: Her mane colors are blue, green, red, and yellow.
Mane/Tail Style: Her mane swoops off to the right side of her face. It is quite short, along with her tail which also swoops to the side. It is also very messy and uncared for.
Eye Color: Bright Blue
Cutie Mark: A yellow star with colorful swirls around it, like a firework.(the colors of her mane/tail)
Other Markings: Her right wing is fake, made of medal. (her left one is normal) Her wings are also abnormally huge.
Physique: Fit, athletic looking.
-Social Stuff-
Current Residence: Cloudsdale
Job: Wonderbolt Trainee/Cadet
Mother: Lip Balm
Father: Bug Catcher
Sibling(s): Prisma Color (twin sister), Sweet Stitch (little sister).
Other Family: N/A
Closest Friends: None at the moment.
Courting/Courted By: No pony at the moment.
Mate: No pony at the moment.
Foal(s): She will never want/have foals.
-Personal Stuff-
Likes:
Sports: This pony would take anytime in the world to just sit down and watch some sports of any kind. Whether it's hoofball to golf, track meets to wrestling, she loves every second of it. It's not too surprising to find this Pegasus sitting on the couch, eating some chips and salsa while watching a game. She also loves to try out for tons of different sports, even if she sucks at it.
Racing/Flying: Taking off into the sky against tons of others fast fliers, the wind in her mane, the cool air in her feathers, it always takes her breath away. Crack normally doesn't ever like to think what it would be like without wings, so she doesn't think about it. Fans cheering her name always makes her happy about racing, and she always knows that somepony is out there, betting that she will win the race.
Loud Music: While starting any race or practice, she has to listen to music before and during her races/practices. Usually others would think that it would keep her off guard, but no.. no. She always says it makes things easier to listen to music. It just calms her down.
Reading/Writing: When Crack is bored or has an idea for something, she'll write a short story about it. When she's bored, she'll read a good chapter book. This Pegasus actually has a published book... about racing.
The Wonderbolts: I know, cliché for a Pegasus, but everypony has a hero or two don't they?
Gum: This mare is usually chewing gum. 1. It calms her down and 2. who wants bad breath? This mare sure doesn't!
Potatoes: Crack's favorite food has always been potatoes. From mashed potatoes to french-fries, she wants them all.
Dislikes:
Other Ponies: Yeah, it's harsh, but she get's super mad easily, so when she is minding her own, and others bug her, she'll be pissed. It's hard to be friends with her.
Eating/Drinking: She just doesn't want to waste time doing these things okay?
Others Touching Her: She hates when others touch her. She isn't a germophobe, she just get's uncomfortable with contact. Unless it's her touching others (which she does all the time), DON'T TOUCH HER.
Braggers: When other ponies brag about how amazing they are, Crack just wants them to go die, ya know? It just makes her want to be better than them (which is most likely already true)
Cheese: And her least favorite food has come onto her plate. What will she do? Throw the plate against the wall and break it. Cheese just grosses her out. The taste and smell makes her want to vomit.
Motivation: Before any race, Quick Crack needs to hear some sort of sound in order to push herself do be the best out there, like her loud music or fans. She loves to hear boo's from her haters. It makes her a lot better especially when she is racing because when she wins, she shuts them all up. What makes her even more excited is having the biggest arrangement of fans cheering her name. She loves to search for that adrenaline spot and take off without anyone knowing the race has started. She loves to push herself to be faster, even if she is at her top speed. She never gives up.
Strengths:
Fast/Agility: Crack is a very fast Pegasus, that's a fact. Though, she isn't the fastest out there *que in rainbow Pegasus* she does have some talent, and agility is her specialty. Any flips, jumps, turns, spins, this is the mare you will need. Though she lacks endurance, she is still quick around anything agility.
Talking Back: This pony always knows what to say in an argument. Unless her head is in the clouds, you're a goner.
Being Strong: Crack is always strong, no matter what. Though she can't control it, she can lift a lot of heavy things.
Sports: Quick Crack is very good at sports. Doesn't matter which one (besides golf), she is good at them. Others usually say she just has a game type mind. She does get all the rules in one swing.
Weaknesses/Flaws:
Being Mad: This pony get's mad in almost a heartbeat. Anything and everything will set her off edge, so beware of this mad horse!
Friendships: She is awful at having or keeping friends. Her attitude is always bad towards them, but she never understands why they leave her. Even her love relationships haven't even had success of hanging on for a week!
Sensitivity: Yeah, she seems hard headed. Yeah, it seems like anything ponies say, doesn't hurt her, but that's her strongest weakness. Any rude word will hit her hard in the face, but she acts as if nothing happened. When she gets out of that area though, she will go insane.
Anxiety: Crack is the definition of anxiety. She is nervous about every single thing in the world. She is also always scared of the outcome of things, always thinking about all the bad ways things will go.
Fears:
Birds: Quick Crack's worst fear is birds. She claims they are demonic aliens that are here to trap all ponies in there bird nests. She hates to find them while flying, and hates when they seem to be following her.
Heights: She is also kind of scared of heights, which is weird for a world class flier. She uses this fear to fly faster, so it's not really a big deal to her anymore.
Deep Water: This mare is also scared of oceans, pools, seas, lakes, rivers, etc. She never learned how to swim, so she is afraid of drowning.
Being Hurt on the Inside/Outside: She is also scared of not being trusted or loved. She hates getting hurt, which happens to her a lot. She always thinks one day she is going to hurt herself so bad, that she will never race again.
The Things in the Dark: Crack is also afraid of monsters and the dark. She always thinks something in the dark is going to get to her. A demonic alien bird perhaps?
Overall Persona: Quick Crack has always been a shy, quick, smart pony. She has always loved the feeling of flying. She always says that the greatest feeling in the world is flying. Over time, she started to love racing so much, her dream to be in the Wonderbolt Academy happened. She believes she is one of the greatest fliers in Equestria, but she can never back up this belief. The only way she could was working out every second of her life. Since she was a filly she would work out to be the best of the best, to of course make her dream of being a trainee be real. She always wanted to make her family proud, since all their talents were never officially made big like they all dreamed.
She never was interested in school, beside gym class of course. She still was a very smart filly and always came out with great grades in the Junior Speedsters Flight Camp, sometimes she does come to teach though for the fillies and colts. She always enjoyed helping others with homework and flying. She was always the 'well known' jock everypony knew. She hated coming to school though because all of the attention she got when she first walked into the door. Crack was always afraid of having others make fun of her, even if she was as popular as she was. She learned a lot about herself anyway during school like her love for feeling the wind, or her love for books, and love for having fans. In fact, if it wasn't for school, she wouldn't have as many fans that cheer her on during a race. She loves her fans.
Now overall this mare is quite harsh, even if she doesn't mean it. She is very introverted, and keeps to herself most the time. It is quite rare to have her walk up and talk to a pony, even if she knows them. She has always been like that. Crack still hates talking to others anyway, especially when they ask her stupid questions or interrupt her on something important she was doing. (like I said, she gets mad over everything) This Pegasus does seem hard to talk to, but don't be afraid.
Background:
Quick Crack was born on a light, cold, winter morning in Ponyville along with her twin sister, Prisma Color. Being born a fraternal twin, Crack never thought much of it. The two ponies were completely different from each other. Crack was a Pegasus (got huge wings from her dad) and Prisma was a unicorn (got the horn from her mother). Their looks were also completely different. Crack was multi-colored like a firework while Prisma was just full of white and purple. As they were the opposite from each other, that never grew them apart. While Crack was up in the clouds, Prisma would be painting a picture of the way the bright colors would glow in the sky as Crack flew. They would never be apart when they were little, Crack being afraid of having others hate her for who she was. Prisma never thought of ponies that way, so she would just be her happy self.
After a few years of being stuck together like magnets, their parents surprised them with a little sister. Crack absolutely hated the idea of having another pony around, though her sister was totally excited. Once the little foal was born, their parents were surprised to see the foal was an earth pony. No wings or horn. Crack was a little happier by that, not having any competition for her athletic flying ability. The purple Pegasus still hated the foal, grabbing attention from her mother and father. Crack started to get a little jealous, even her twin sister left to care for the foal named Sweet Stitch. The colorful pony got quite rude, now not wanting to hang with her family anymore. Instead she would lock herself in her room and read books, along with write them. She never went outside anymore, fearing other ponies for liking her little sister more then her.
A few more years past, sticking to herself and only to herself. Her parents were getting a little worried for her. Once it was time for school, Crack was terrified. She started to develop anxiety attacks, which took away all her energy in herself. Her confidence was always low, making her never wanting to fly. Her and her twin were made to go outside, Prisma being excited while Crack was breathing heavily. Everyday it would be like that before school, during school, and after school, until one day Crack came home with a piece of paper in her mouth.
Cheer was boiling in her large wings, flying inside the house and going straight to her father. Being a bug pony, her dad had no idea about was the paper was going to be, unless his daughter had a random glimpse of killing bugs. Crack gave the paper to her father, then he rolled it open seeing 'Junior Speedster's Flight Camp'. Her father grinned, giving Crack a happy look. Crack had her own smile going on, it being rare for her to smile. Crack started to tell a story about how she wanted to fly with the pegasi and show her stuff. The sudden interest came from having a field trip to watch the Annual Running of the Leaves. Seeing all the ponies jumping tree stumps and running around rocks/boulders, Crack thought it was the most amazing thing ever. She told her father the story, then he told her a little story as well. Apparently in the older generations of her father's side, they had a whole flock of flying/talented fliers. They all set records in the Wonderbolt Academy, setting a new dream for Quick Crack. She loved the idea of going to Junior Speedsters, just to know how she would get to her dream. Of course her parents agreed, letting her go off to Cloudsdale everyday for school.
The young filly never really knew how talented she was in agility. The first cloud obstacle course she raced on made her make her dream even better. The teachers were quite surprised from the filly, being from Ponyville. The filly's students as well were fascinated in her, as she flipped around the cloud hoops in such a way, making a small burst of color around her. She became popular very quick, which she wasn't very fond of. She was still quite silent when talking to others, but when talked to she was a tad rude and awkward. She never really knew how to talk to others, which brought on to her present days.
After months of learning how to do stunts, she finally received her cutie mark.
Cutie Mark Story: It all started when she was spinning around some cloud barrels, showing off others (in a quiet way) how sharp she can turn without failing move around. She had to practice though, knowing a test was coming up soon. The test was quite important. If you passed, you got to go to the next level/grade of flying. If you didn't pass, you got held back. Sooner or later, she took a small water break, other Pegasus fillies walking by and giving her hoof bumps. Crack's heart was racing, feeling the anxiety filling up her mind and wings. Having to fly in front of the teachers AND class was freaking her out. She was quite terrified, so she took her mind off by watching other ponies practice.
As the time passed, the test finally came by. Pony after pony, failing or (most) passing their tests. Crack was sweating her hooves out, trying to calm herself down as a headache became to form. Her heart was racing as her eye sight became blurry. She wanted to get her turn over fast, so she flew over to the teacher to volunteer for her test. The teacher agreed, as Crack set herself on the starting line. Her eyes were fixed on the first cloud barrel, it waiting for her to turn sharply across and to the next barrel. She started to not feel her hooves, slowly rocking from side to side. Finally the whistle blew, making Crack burst off into the sky and to the first barrel. She tried to ignore the ponies watching her, trying to feel the air in her wings. The barrel finally came up, sharply turning and to the next barrel. She got faster, knowing she was off to a great start. She flew around the next barrel successfully, next heading for the cloud hoop. To impress her teacher, she wanted to show a little something special, so she flew around the clouds which formed the hoop, making a colorful streak around the cloud. Finally after a few more hoops and flying around them with her speed trail, the last hoop came, which was a steep drop down, then back up. Crack didn't hesitate, flying down the straight slope, the wind around her quickly moving fast. Her large wings flapped as fast as they could, trying to reach the last hoop. Reaching into the hoop, then quickly bouncing through it, a small spark burst behind her, creating a small firework.
The loud crack made her classmates cheer as she landed at the finish line with a big huff. The sweat from her forehead came down onto her face. The teacher was in shock, telling her to turn around. Crack looked to see a small bunch of fireworks disappear, making her eyes go big in amazement. She knew she had past the test, but then seeing something bright appear on her flank made her smile even bigger. A little firework appeared on her flank, the same colors of her mane/tail.
A few more years past, graduating school early and reaching home. She moved out and into Cloudsdale to make her biggest dream happen, to go to the Wonderbolt Academy. She said a quick goodbye to her family and set off. Soon she sent in an application to go into the Academy, which was accepted.
Metal Wing Story: Practicing some agility like always, Crack soared through the bunches of clouds that scattered across the sky. Speeding into the white clouds, she started to twirl, flying in a circle motion. Now twirling at a rapid pace, she closed her eyes stupidly, not seeing the trees up ahead. Once she hit the last cloud, a tree quickly was in the way, before she even noticed it was there.
She opened her eyes, panic struck her along with the tree. She scratched her wing on the tree, then mindlessly kept flying, running into more bushes and trees. She finally decided to land, but fell onto her right wing from tripping on a thick tree stump.
In a lot of pain, Crack got up, looking around for somepony to help her. Once a pony noticed, she was taken to the hospital. She broke two large bones, along with a huge scar in her wing, which soon became very infected. They had to amputate her wing from not being able to heal. They gave her a fake wing, but she could fly perfectly fine. She can fly like a normal pony can, but has little endurance from the heavy thing on her back.
Link to sheet: missfantastic08.deviantart.com/art/Character-Sheet-Quick-Crack-584911536?ga_submit_new=10%253A1453051666&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1
Name: Quick Crack
Nickname/Alias(es): Crack, Charger
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Female
Age: Young Adult, 19
Sexuality: Lesbian
Additional Status: Crack doesn't wear anything special besides her fake wing.
-Appearance-
Pelt Color: Dark Grey
Mane/Tail Color: Her mane colors are blue, green, red, and yellow.
Mane/Tail Style: Her mane swoops off to the right side of her face. It is quite short, along with her tail which also swoops to the side. It is also very messy and uncared for.
Eye Color: Bright Blue
Cutie Mark: A yellow star with colorful swirls around it, like a firework.(the colors of her mane/tail)
Other Markings: Her right wing is fake, made of medal. (her left one is normal) Her wings are also abnormally huge.
Physique: Fit, athletic looking.
-Social Stuff-
Current Residence: Cloudsdale
Job: Wonderbolt Trainee/Cadet
Mother: Lip Balm
Father: Bug Catcher
Sibling(s): Prisma Color (twin sister), Sweet Stitch (little sister).
Other Family: N/A
Closest Friends: None at the moment.
Courting/Courted By: No pony at the moment.
Mate: No pony at the moment.
Foal(s): She will never want/have foals.
-Personal Stuff-
Likes:
Sports: This pony would take anytime in the world to just sit down and watch some sports of any kind. Whether it's hoofball to golf, track meets to wrestling, she loves every second of it. It's not too surprising to find this Pegasus sitting on the couch, eating some chips and salsa while watching a game. She also loves to try out for tons of different sports, even if she sucks at it.
Racing/Flying: Taking off into the sky against tons of others fast fliers, the wind in her mane, the cool air in her feathers, it always takes her breath away. Crack normally doesn't ever like to think what it would be like without wings, so she doesn't think about it. Fans cheering her name always makes her happy about racing, and she always knows that somepony is out there, betting that she will win the race.
Loud Music: While starting any race or practice, she has to listen to music before and during her races/practices. Usually others would think that it would keep her off guard, but no.. no. She always says it makes things easier to listen to music. It just calms her down.
Reading/Writing: When Crack is bored or has an idea for something, she'll write a short story about it. When she's bored, she'll read a good chapter book. This Pegasus actually has a published book... about racing.
The Wonderbolts: I know, cliché for a Pegasus, but everypony has a hero or two don't they?
Gum: This mare is usually chewing gum. 1. It calms her down and 2. who wants bad breath? This mare sure doesn't!
Potatoes: Crack's favorite food has always been potatoes. From mashed potatoes to french-fries, she wants them all.
Dislikes:
Other Ponies: Yeah, it's harsh, but she get's super mad easily, so when she is minding her own, and others bug her, she'll be pissed. It's hard to be friends with her.
Eating/Drinking: She just doesn't want to waste time doing these things okay?
Others Touching Her: She hates when others touch her. She isn't a germophobe, she just get's uncomfortable with contact. Unless it's her touching others (which she does all the time), DON'T TOUCH HER.
Braggers: When other ponies brag about how amazing they are, Crack just wants them to go die, ya know? It just makes her want to be better than them (which is most likely already true)
Cheese: And her least favorite food has come onto her plate. What will she do? Throw the plate against the wall and break it. Cheese just grosses her out. The taste and smell makes her want to vomit.
Motivation: Before any race, Quick Crack needs to hear some sort of sound in order to push herself do be the best out there, like her loud music or fans. She loves to hear boo's from her haters. It makes her a lot better especially when she is racing because when she wins, she shuts them all up. What makes her even more excited is having the biggest arrangement of fans cheering her name. She loves to search for that adrenaline spot and take off without anyone knowing the race has started. She loves to push herself to be faster, even if she is at her top speed. She never gives up.
Strengths:
Fast/Agility: Crack is a very fast Pegasus, that's a fact. Though, she isn't the fastest out there *que in rainbow Pegasus* she does have some talent, and agility is her specialty. Any flips, jumps, turns, spins, this is the mare you will need. Though she lacks endurance, she is still quick around anything agility.
Talking Back: This pony always knows what to say in an argument. Unless her head is in the clouds, you're a goner.
Being Strong: Crack is always strong, no matter what. Though she can't control it, she can lift a lot of heavy things.
Sports: Quick Crack is very good at sports. Doesn't matter which one (besides golf), she is good at them. Others usually say she just has a game type mind. She does get all the rules in one swing.
Weaknesses/Flaws:
Being Mad: This pony get's mad in almost a heartbeat. Anything and everything will set her off edge, so beware of this mad horse!
Friendships: She is awful at having or keeping friends. Her attitude is always bad towards them, but she never understands why they leave her. Even her love relationships haven't even had success of hanging on for a week!
Sensitivity: Yeah, she seems hard headed. Yeah, it seems like anything ponies say, doesn't hurt her, but that's her strongest weakness. Any rude word will hit her hard in the face, but she acts as if nothing happened. When she gets out of that area though, she will go insane.
Anxiety: Crack is the definition of anxiety. She is nervous about every single thing in the world. She is also always scared of the outcome of things, always thinking about all the bad ways things will go.
Fears:
Birds: Quick Crack's worst fear is birds. She claims they are demonic aliens that are here to trap all ponies in there bird nests. She hates to find them while flying, and hates when they seem to be following her.
Heights: She is also kind of scared of heights, which is weird for a world class flier. She uses this fear to fly faster, so it's not really a big deal to her anymore.
Deep Water: This mare is also scared of oceans, pools, seas, lakes, rivers, etc. She never learned how to swim, so she is afraid of drowning.
Being Hurt on the Inside/Outside: She is also scared of not being trusted or loved. She hates getting hurt, which happens to her a lot. She always thinks one day she is going to hurt herself so bad, that she will never race again.
The Things in the Dark: Crack is also afraid of monsters and the dark. She always thinks something in the dark is going to get to her. A demonic alien bird perhaps?
Overall Persona: Quick Crack has always been a shy, quick, smart pony. She has always loved the feeling of flying. She always says that the greatest feeling in the world is flying. Over time, she started to love racing so much, her dream to be in the Wonderbolt Academy happened. She believes she is one of the greatest fliers in Equestria, but she can never back up this belief. The only way she could was working out every second of her life. Since she was a filly she would work out to be the best of the best, to of course make her dream of being a trainee be real. She always wanted to make her family proud, since all their talents were never officially made big like they all dreamed.
She never was interested in school, beside gym class of course. She still was a very smart filly and always came out with great grades in the Junior Speedsters Flight Camp, sometimes she does come to teach though for the fillies and colts. She always enjoyed helping others with homework and flying. She was always the 'well known' jock everypony knew. She hated coming to school though because all of the attention she got when she first walked into the door. Crack was always afraid of having others make fun of her, even if she was as popular as she was. She learned a lot about herself anyway during school like her love for feeling the wind, or her love for books, and love for having fans. In fact, if it wasn't for school, she wouldn't have as many fans that cheer her on during a race. She loves her fans.
Now overall this mare is quite harsh, even if she doesn't mean it. She is very introverted, and keeps to herself most the time. It is quite rare to have her walk up and talk to a pony, even if she knows them. She has always been like that. Crack still hates talking to others anyway, especially when they ask her stupid questions or interrupt her on something important she was doing. (like I said, she gets mad over everything) This Pegasus does seem hard to talk to, but don't be afraid.
Background:
Quick Crack was born on a light, cold, winter morning in Ponyville along with her twin sister, Prisma Color. Being born a fraternal twin, Crack never thought much of it. The two ponies were completely different from each other. Crack was a Pegasus (got huge wings from her dad) and Prisma was a unicorn (got the horn from her mother). Their looks were also completely different. Crack was multi-colored like a firework while Prisma was just full of white and purple. As they were the opposite from each other, that never grew them apart. While Crack was up in the clouds, Prisma would be painting a picture of the way the bright colors would glow in the sky as Crack flew. They would never be apart when they were little, Crack being afraid of having others hate her for who she was. Prisma never thought of ponies that way, so she would just be her happy self.
After a few years of being stuck together like magnets, their parents surprised them with a little sister. Crack absolutely hated the idea of having another pony around, though her sister was totally excited. Once the little foal was born, their parents were surprised to see the foal was an earth pony. No wings or horn. Crack was a little happier by that, not having any competition for her athletic flying ability. The purple Pegasus still hated the foal, grabbing attention from her mother and father. Crack started to get a little jealous, even her twin sister left to care for the foal named Sweet Stitch. The colorful pony got quite rude, now not wanting to hang with her family anymore. Instead she would lock herself in her room and read books, along with write them. She never went outside anymore, fearing other ponies for liking her little sister more then her.
A few more years past, sticking to herself and only to herself. Her parents were getting a little worried for her. Once it was time for school, Crack was terrified. She started to develop anxiety attacks, which took away all her energy in herself. Her confidence was always low, making her never wanting to fly. Her and her twin were made to go outside, Prisma being excited while Crack was breathing heavily. Everyday it would be like that before school, during school, and after school, until one day Crack came home with a piece of paper in her mouth.
Cheer was boiling in her large wings, flying inside the house and going straight to her father. Being a bug pony, her dad had no idea about was the paper was going to be, unless his daughter had a random glimpse of killing bugs. Crack gave the paper to her father, then he rolled it open seeing 'Junior Speedster's Flight Camp'. Her father grinned, giving Crack a happy look. Crack had her own smile going on, it being rare for her to smile. Crack started to tell a story about how she wanted to fly with the pegasi and show her stuff. The sudden interest came from having a field trip to watch the Annual Running of the Leaves. Seeing all the ponies jumping tree stumps and running around rocks/boulders, Crack thought it was the most amazing thing ever. She told her father the story, then he told her a little story as well. Apparently in the older generations of her father's side, they had a whole flock of flying/talented fliers. They all set records in the Wonderbolt Academy, setting a new dream for Quick Crack. She loved the idea of going to Junior Speedsters, just to know how she would get to her dream. Of course her parents agreed, letting her go off to Cloudsdale everyday for school.
The young filly never really knew how talented she was in agility. The first cloud obstacle course she raced on made her make her dream even better. The teachers were quite surprised from the filly, being from Ponyville. The filly's students as well were fascinated in her, as she flipped around the cloud hoops in such a way, making a small burst of color around her. She became popular very quick, which she wasn't very fond of. She was still quite silent when talking to others, but when talked to she was a tad rude and awkward. She never really knew how to talk to others, which brought on to her present days.
After months of learning how to do stunts, she finally received her cutie mark.
Cutie Mark Story: It all started when she was spinning around some cloud barrels, showing off others (in a quiet way) how sharp she can turn without failing move around. She had to practice though, knowing a test was coming up soon. The test was quite important. If you passed, you got to go to the next level/grade of flying. If you didn't pass, you got held back. Sooner or later, she took a small water break, other Pegasus fillies walking by and giving her hoof bumps. Crack's heart was racing, feeling the anxiety filling up her mind and wings. Having to fly in front of the teachers AND class was freaking her out. She was quite terrified, so she took her mind off by watching other ponies practice.
As the time passed, the test finally came by. Pony after pony, failing or (most) passing their tests. Crack was sweating her hooves out, trying to calm herself down as a headache became to form. Her heart was racing as her eye sight became blurry. She wanted to get her turn over fast, so she flew over to the teacher to volunteer for her test. The teacher agreed, as Crack set herself on the starting line. Her eyes were fixed on the first cloud barrel, it waiting for her to turn sharply across and to the next barrel. She started to not feel her hooves, slowly rocking from side to side. Finally the whistle blew, making Crack burst off into the sky and to the first barrel. She tried to ignore the ponies watching her, trying to feel the air in her wings. The barrel finally came up, sharply turning and to the next barrel. She got faster, knowing she was off to a great start. She flew around the next barrel successfully, next heading for the cloud hoop. To impress her teacher, she wanted to show a little something special, so she flew around the clouds which formed the hoop, making a colorful streak around the cloud. Finally after a few more hoops and flying around them with her speed trail, the last hoop came, which was a steep drop down, then back up. Crack didn't hesitate, flying down the straight slope, the wind around her quickly moving fast. Her large wings flapped as fast as they could, trying to reach the last hoop. Reaching into the hoop, then quickly bouncing through it, a small spark burst behind her, creating a small firework.
The loud crack made her classmates cheer as she landed at the finish line with a big huff. The sweat from her forehead came down onto her face. The teacher was in shock, telling her to turn around. Crack looked to see a small bunch of fireworks disappear, making her eyes go big in amazement. She knew she had past the test, but then seeing something bright appear on her flank made her smile even bigger. A little firework appeared on her flank, the same colors of her mane/tail.
A few more years past, graduating school early and reaching home. She moved out and into Cloudsdale to make her biggest dream happen, to go to the Wonderbolt Academy. She said a quick goodbye to her family and set off. Soon she sent in an application to go into the Academy, which was accepted.
Metal Wing Story: Practicing some agility like always, Crack soared through the bunches of clouds that scattered across the sky. Speeding into the white clouds, she started to twirl, flying in a circle motion. Now twirling at a rapid pace, she closed her eyes stupidly, not seeing the trees up ahead. Once she hit the last cloud, a tree quickly was in the way, before she even noticed it was there.
She opened her eyes, panic struck her along with the tree. She scratched her wing on the tree, then mindlessly kept flying, running into more bushes and trees. She finally decided to land, but fell onto her right wing from tripping on a thick tree stump.
In a lot of pain, Crack got up, looking around for somepony to help her. Once a pony noticed, she was taken to the hospital. She broke two large bones, along with a huge scar in her wing, which soon became very infected. They had to amputate her wing from not being able to heal. They gave her a fake wing, but she could fly perfectly fine. She can fly like a normal pony can, but has little endurance from the heavy thing on her back.
Link to sheet: missfantastic08.deviantart.com/art/Character-Sheet-Quick-Crack-584911536?ga_submit_new=10%253A1453051666&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1